Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Why Did Dredd Fail At The Box Office (Improved)

1 comment:

  1. Once this essay gets going it is quite good. You take too long to directly answer the question, remember to get your opinion across to the examiner straight away.

    Once you break your answer down into the sections (Pre Production, Production and Post Production) your points are fare more developed. Do try and avoid being too informal in your writing (see the bit where you accuse them of being a bit generic).

    Well done Moll. A big improvement.